Thursday, August 22, 2013

The Adventure of Mr Whiskers...

Mr Whiskers packed his mice stuff and set off to the ferry boat to London.  He packed his mice sandwiches, mice checkers, and mice sleeping bag.  Halfway there the boat sank. Mr Whiskers had to get his magic bike out of his suitcase.  He set of for London on the water.  The first thing he saw was the Queen's castle with banana guards.  The Queen's head was poking out of the window. 
 "Oh that cat is handsome," she said.  A mouse came out from under the ground.  The cat pounced on the mouse.  Then the queen screamed because the mouse was her pet.  Sadly the cat went back home on a pirate ship.  It was not a nice adventure.
By Rion

1 comment:

Room 8 said...

Rion your writing is very good. It made Room 8 laugh and it made us feel like we could see Mr Whiskers.