Shared Writing

Here we are hard at work!!

We are learning to write recounts. A recount is writing about something you have done. You have to have your ideas in order. This morning we worked in groups to write a recount about our trip to Filadelfios. Each group wrote one part of the recount and then we put it all together...

Our Visit to Filadelfios.
On Tuesday we went to Filadelfios to find out how to make pizza.
First we went into the kitchen. We went into the chiller. It was very cold because that is where the food is kept.
Next Logan made a pizza. He put cheese, mushrooms, ham and pineapple on the pizza. He chopped the pizza with a strange knife. The chopping was loud.
Then Logan showed us the drink machine. All of the buttons on the machine poured different drinks. He gave us some lemonade while we were waitng for the pizza to cook. It tasted sweet and bubbly.
Finally we got the pizza out of the oven. Logan put the pizza in a box. We took it back to school for morning tea. It smelt delicious on the way back in the bus. The bus driver wanted to eat our pizza!
By room 10